Oh this was a lovely chapter. The "kids" fighting over who sits where and Jack's irritation, I loved the way you worked in canon and the snogging game,that Ianto was trying to make Gwen feel bad,your interpretation of "the Look" that Jack gives Ianto as irritation and disappointment,and the conversation after and Jack talking him through the panic attack...*sigh*..and challenging him to make the most of this opportunity. Brilliant. And there's so much to come*shivers*. Update tomorrow?*puppy eyes*
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Date: 2008-07-18 03:03 am (UTC)