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Title: Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 22

Rating: PG

Warnings: Nope.

Spoilers: Season One thru Countrycide (1x6)

Disclaimer: Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb. Just goofin' around!

Summary:  In which Jack plans a little outing...

Notes: Comments are love! Thanks! :o)

Previous Chapters



Vizzini's Rule: Chapter Twenty-Two

“Ianto!”

“Yes, sir?” Ianto replied as he threaded his way through the bead curtain.

“Do we have any camping gear?” Jack asked.

“Camping gear?” Ianto asked blankly. “You mean, like tents?”

“Tents, sleeping bags, whatever.”

Ianto thought for a moment. “I believe there are some old army supplies down in the lower basement. I can see what there is.”

“Good, good. Get on that will you?”

“Of course, sir. May I ask why?”

Jack grinned. “New case. The police have requested our assistance with a rash of missing persons up in Brecon Beacons.”

“And this will require camping gear?”

Jack shrugged. “It’s a ways out there and I thought it might be fun. We could all use a little break,” he added quietly.

Ianto nodded. It had been a rough week for Jack. When the rest of the team finally deigned to return to work, they had ignored Jack as much as possible until they each came to grips with his decision regarding the little girl. Ianto was surprised that Gwen was the first to relent. He came to believe that Gwen didn’t necessarily think Jack was right, but that she just couldn’t stand giving him the silent treatment. As soon as she forgave him, she became Jack’s shadow, taking her work into his office, intercepting Ianto so she could bring him his coffee, generally making a nuisance of herself, Ianto thought with that twinge of jealousy which always hit him when he saw Jack and Gwen together.

Now seeing the gloomy look on Jack’s face, Ianto reached out to touch his shoulder briefly. “I’ll go right down and see what I can find. When do you want to leave?”

Jack smiled and covered Ianto’s hand with his own. “Thanks, Ianto. Could you have everything ready by lunch time?”

Ianto glanced at his watch. “If I can find the equipment easily, then yes. I’ll let you know if it’s going to be a problem.”

“Thanks again, Yan. Be sure you leave enough time to grab a change of clothes.”

Ianto looked confused, “For whom?”

“For yourself,” Jack replied in surprised tone. “I don’t imagine you’ll want to be sleeping rough in your suit.”

“You want me to come?” Ianto asked, unable to keep the disbelief out of his voice.

Jack looked at him curiously, “Yeah, I said ‘the team’ and that means you too.”

“But… but I’ve never done fieldwork before, sir. I didn’t think… I mean… well, why now?”

Jack reached for Ianto and then hesitated and pulled his arms back, crossing them over his chest. “It’s like I said, we could all use a little break. Don’t you want to come?”

“I… I…,” Ianto was at a loss, but Jack expected him to join the team and he didn’t want to let him down. “Yes,” he said finally.

“Good. Then let me know what you find in the basement, go get changed, and we’ll have some fun.”

Ianto nodded and started to accompany Jack back downstairs. They had almost reached the service lift when Jack turned suddenly and said, “Oh, and don’t tell the others. I want it to be a surprise.” He grinned like a little kid and entered the lift. Ianto, safely out of sight behind Jack, rolled his eyes. Oh yeah, he thought, it’ll be a surprise alright.


TBC in Chapter Twenty-Three

 

Date: 2008-07-17 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cynic2022.livejournal.com
Love it! So much with the love. Torn between wanting to get to the supersexy Janto bits and dreading the horrors of Countrycide. (Of course since it's you writing I'll march bravely on, but I expect that after a reasonable period of time there will be happy Janto cuddling.) Great chapter!

Date: 2008-07-17 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
So much with the love right back atcha!! :D Don't worry the canon events of Countrycide are realtively brief. Then? The cuddling. :D

Thank you!

Date: 2008-07-17 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cynic2022.livejournal.com
Cuddling. Oh cuddling. You=Hero

Date: 2008-07-17 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
*blushes* hee. yay!

Date: 2008-07-17 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com
Oh man, here comes the pain....but oh *grins evilly* I know what comes next...my FAV part - *SQUEEEEEE* *runs off to read it again* oh crap, did I ever give proper fb? *scratches head* anyway, back to this chapter...love Ianto's thought there at the end...yup...the others will be surprised. I really like the interaction between the two of them here and I'm SO LOOKING FORWARD to you know what :)

Date: 2008-07-17 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Hee! Your *squeees* make me *squee*!! Um, I think the gist of your fb was OMGOMG! ;)

So glad you're excited about what's coming up! :D :D :D

Date: 2008-07-17 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com
LOL oh right...had to form coherent thoughts...okay...look for it later this evening :) told you it made me lose all my senses :) I LOVED THAT BIT!!!!!

Date: 2008-07-17 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Hee no worries! Been working on the...we'll just say the next part. :)

thanks hun!!

Date: 2008-07-17 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
I absolutely love that icon! :D

Date: 2008-07-17 02:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bookwrm89.livejournal.com
*resisting the urge, once again, to bitch slap Gwen*
Great lead in to the events in Countrycide. Can't wait to see what you do with it!

Date: 2008-07-17 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Oh, don't resist for my benefit!! ;)

Thanks! I hope you like the rest too!! :D

Date: 2008-07-17 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bookwrm89.livejournal.com
*bitch slaps Gwen, just for buttononthetop*
Ahhh...that feels better!

Date: 2008-07-17 02:36 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-07-17 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] christine-twfan.livejournal.com
Oh dear...heartache coming. And now I'm off to grab my DVDs to watch this and Cybergirl!

Date: 2008-07-17 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
But all will be well...eventually. :D Enjoy the rewatch!! (how could you not!?!)

Date: 2008-07-17 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angst-queen-98.livejournal.com
It was too SHORT! *whines piteously* But given what thrace has said, there's a lot to look forward to. :-D

Right now I'm in the process of copying some eps in hopes of luring a friend into the TW fold. The next ep up? You guessed it! Countrycide! Whoooot! I'll be primed for the next chapter!

Date: 2008-07-17 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Yeah, thrace is a big ol' tease! :D

Lure! Lure! I've dragged 5 peeps into the TW world myself - isn't it the best?! Enjoy the ep and hopefully you'll enjoy the next bit up tomorrow. :o)

Date: 2008-07-17 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com
Ok, now I have problem with you: could you stop to write gripping and so interesting and well written story ? Please ? I have to go, bed time, I work tomorrow early morning and what I do ? I read your story and smiling. Hé ! Ho ! Because some people try to have a life here !!! What have you done ? I'm hooked... Ho gosh, I'm worry now... lol Take care ;)

Date: 2008-07-17 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Uh-oh! I'm sorry? ;)

I'm so glad your enjoying my little fic! Should I add a warning that it may become addictive? Hee.

Have a great day at work and remember, the fic will always be there when you have free time!! :D

Thank you!!

Date: 2008-07-17 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jbs-teeth.livejournal.com
Oof, we just had a flash of happy Janto, and now 'Countrycide.' Yikes.

But, always thrilled to see what comes next (and hoping you're not such a tease next time: like, 200 words?! No fair).

Date: 2008-07-17 04:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Oh come on, it was 553 words! Geez!! ;)

Heh - think of it as the bit before the credits. :D Next chapter is much longer, I promise!

Date: 2008-07-17 07:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charlotte3006.livejournal.com
YEY! Brilliant as usual!!!
Next chapter coming soon??
:) xx

Date: 2008-07-18 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Next chapter up as soon as I proof. :D

Thanks so much for reading!
:)

Date: 2008-07-17 09:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keshikat.livejournal.com
I love the way you write Jack ^-^ More soon!

Date: 2008-07-18 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Thanks so much!! :D More soon, yes!

Date: 2008-07-17 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] butterflycell.livejournal.com
Awww! Bless him =] I could picture the look of surprise on Ianto's face perfecty! I cant' wait to see your spin on Countrycide =]

Great work!

Date: 2008-07-18 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Hee - more up tonight! Hope you like it! :D

Date: 2008-07-17 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seether-79.livejournal.com
Great up-date; feeling bad for everyone becuase I know whats coming next though. Wonderfully written and can't wait for more :)

Date: 2008-07-18 12:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Thanks! Yeah, the badness is on the way but there is goodness afterward. :)

Date: 2008-07-18 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lambsendbeds.livejournal.com
"Oh yeah,he thought,it'll be a surprise alright." Oh boy are there surprises aplenty in store. I'm a junkie for Janto h/c so I have high expectations-entirely due to your brilliance. I hope we get quite a few chapters out of this.*jumps up and down with excitement*

Date: 2008-07-19 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Uh-oh, I hope I can live up to your expectations!! There will be "h" and there will defintely be "c" - I can promise that! :D

Date: 2008-07-19 01:51 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-07-25 03:55 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lucifuge-5.livejournal.com
Oh, gods! and so we get to "Countrycide" (a.k.a. the one TW ep that makes me squirm...) Well, not only is the gore factor a thousand times higher, but also Ianto (imho) has the audacity to 'forget' Jack's amazingly non-CPR skills shown during "Cyberwoman". If I remember correctly, Jack sort of gave Ianto a bit of pout/grouchy face for saying Lisa was the last person he had kissed...

But I digress, favourite line: when Ianto refers to Gwen "generally making a nuisance of herself". I'm not one to Gwen-bash, but I've always disliked how the powers that be want Gwen + Jack to have some star-crossed lovers romance... (steps off soapbox). Anyhoo, I'm off to reading the next chapter...

Date: 2008-07-25 04:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buttononthetop.livejournal.com
Yes, the squick factor was high in this one! Hee - can't wait to see if you like my take on "the LOOK" from Jack. I went a different direction than I originally planned...

I like a little light Gwen-bashing, just so we all rememeber who Jack belongs with. ;)
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